Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
anbei sende ich Ihnen Ihre Anzeige zur Korrektur, mit der Bitte um kurze R眉ckmeldung ob diese so in Ordnung ist.
Vielen Dank
Falls Fragen, einfach fragen!
Mit freundlichen Gr眉脽en
Dear Sir or Madam,
Please find enclosed a corrected copy of your advertisement. It would be appreciated if you could get back to us after you have received it, and tell us if everything is ok.
Thank you
If you have any questions do not hesitate to ask!
Yours sincerely
I'm not sure about the correct wording that's all. Please change the english one and not the german one!
Thank you!Hi - please can you check if this translation is right? german-english?
Personally, I think the English version is better than the German, with the second English version being the best. I would make these tiny changes, however:
To Whom It May Concern:
Enclosed is a corrected copy of your advertisement. Please let us know if it is acceptable.
Thank you.
Feel free to contact us if you have any questions, comments, or concerns.
Sincerely yours,
This whole "to whom it may concern" and "sincerely yours" is not a very proper way of addressing a letter. I don't know what country you are in, but the British English way is to write "Dear Sir or Madam" and "Yours faithfully" at the end. If you know the addressee's name, write "Dear Mr Jones or Mrs Smith" then "Yours sincerely".Hi - please can you check if this translation is right? german-english?
Your English seems perfect, and it is phrased in an "English" way, no need to worry
Presuming you want them to double check an ad they originated and contact you, both translations are fine in structure and readability.Hi - please can you check if this translation is right? german-english?
sieg heil
a gave burger j thumbs up. also try to change the salutation around "yours sincerely" into "sincerely yours"
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